Thought for the Day
Photo by Annie
He's standing just behind the column
white suit , vested, swag chain
reaching
for the watch his daddy gave him
when he graduated
from law school.
She's telling the maid
what must be done by the
time
they return
and checking
her hat
one last time
before they get in the carriage.
When he looks at her he
knows
she is breathlessly beautiful
and he
the luckiest man alive.
Behind
the screen door
she admires
his handsome impatience
then hurries out
the door.
©Herb Ratliff, October 2, 2012, All Rights Reserved
This poem paints a beautiful picture of a moment in time--something out of a charming story of life in the Antebellum south. But what's really remarkable about this poem is the opportunity is presents to think about the meaning and use of the word "time" and wonder about the implications. The title made me think of this at first. And then I began to question my initial idea of the setting; perhaps it was modern times and this couple was setting out to attend a formal wedding. Or maybe yet a different time altogether. And then I thought about the phrase "there will be time" and what it implies: things to come; a time and a place for everything; to everything a season, etc. Then I looked at the word "time" as it appeared throughout the poem; sometimes giving a sense of urgency, sometimes juxtaposed with responsibility, sometimes indicating self-awareness. Your mind could begin to weave all kinds of thoughts suggested by these words. I could go on and on.
ReplyDeletePerhaps I'm thinking in a more analytical way as a result of watching the discussion videos in our poetry class. But I have to compliment you, Herb, on a beautifully written poem that offers much opportunity for contemplation.
P.S. Love the photo, too.
ReplyDeleteThe Realtor looks at the photo and sees a neglected but once gracious house. The client sees a neglected but once gracious house where two people loved and created a home. The poet sees the man behind the column looking at the woman who winks at him as he assists her into the carriage.
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